Nice presentation. I like the way it keeps it simple. I spent half the time wanting to add in this that and the other, but finally realized that the people we are trying to reach need the simple method.
When you pitch that to folks, and if a bunch are looking to go a single shoot, I recommend you offer them a prep night where they can bring their gear to somewhere suitable and you can work with them a little. Topics should include.
-Here is how to put your sling on.
-How to let the bolt forward and lock it back with your rifle (some wont know)
-Management of the tube fed rifle, there is always one.
-Making sure people have enough mags, a shooting mat, and other odds and ends
Especially with kids and spouses, if they have some idea how to make their rifle work ahead of time, they will be able to concentrate on learning the shooting part a lot better.